Year: 2022

It’s Cool To Be Kind

I commented on Sinivas Blog post.

First I watched a video to show example on what to do.

Next I found a person to comment on there blog. I commented on Sinivas blog.

Lastly I posted my comment on her blog so she could improve on it next time.

I enjoyed commenting on her blog. I did well on knowing what she can improve on. I need to improve on know wht is should write about adding more information.

SLJ Poetry Slam

I completed a poetry slam.

First I took a picture of myself and put it in the middle.

Next I had to describe what I would do in the summer with words. For ex: Trip. For the word trip I would go to the Beach.

I enjoyed taking the picture. I did well on know what Picture i would go for. I need to improve on going to different other places.

Temperature

I completed a silde with the hottest and the coldest place on earth.

First I found some information about the hottest place on earth. The hottest place on earth is Death Valley.The temperature  is 80.8 degree celsius. The Timbisha Shoshone Indians were the first people to live in Death Valley.  Death Valley was found when the European Americans tried to find a short cut to the gold fields.

Next I found out the coldest place on earth. The coldest place on earth is Antarctice. The temperature had dropped down to -89.6 degree celsius. The coldest part of the Antarctic is the East part of Antarctica. The Soviet Union found Antarctica in July the 1983.

I enjoyed creating the slide. I did well on finding the information. I need to improve on finding intresting facts.

Temperature

I learned how to tell temperature by using degrees celsiuc

First I learned the hot temperature and the cold temperature which is the 100 degree celcius and 0 degree celcius.

Next I did a template of addition and subtraction. It adds when it rises up and it falls when its going down.

Lastly I did a DLO, explaning what is the hottest place on earth and the coldest place on earth.

I enjoyed completing the DLO. I did well on add and subtract. I need to improve finding more intresting information.

 

Design Transportation.

I wrote an explanation about my design of transportation.

First I finished my labels on my DLO to complete my design. My transportation was land and air transport. I combined a car with a police helicopter.

Next I wrote an introduction and explained why I designed this vehicle. I designed it because sometimes the police helicopters can lose a criminal in a tunnel so they can land anywhere and chase the criminal in the long tunnel.

I enjoyed designing my vehicle. I did well on combining the 2 vehicles. I need to improve on knowing the information that I made.

Comment thread

I revised how to write a comment thread.

First I revised the 6 things that you need in a comment thread. It is a greeting, Thoughtful comment, connection, More info,  Question, and a farewell. 

Next as a partner we went onto someone’s blog and commented on it. My partner commented on my blog with all of the things that you need to include in. Then I replied back to him and gave him some extra information in my comment. We continued this step 1 more time on a google docs. When we were finished we posted the comment on our blog.

I enjoyed replying back to my partner. I did well on knowing some of the 6 things that you need to include in a comment. I need to improve on figuring out more information to tell back to my partner.

 

Podcast

I completed a podcast about the good things and the bad things about the space shuttle.

First reserched about the good things and the bad things about the shuttle orbiter. The bad thing that happend to the shuttle orbiter is that it crashed 2 times.

Next, we wrote notes on a google docs to remember what to say. I wrote down the bad thing about the shuttle orbiter.

Then we recorded our group saying our lines for the recording.

I enjoyed recording. I did well on finding the information. I need to improve on find out more information about the crash.